that sucks
Yeah. I just got up and got ready to go to classes and I heard this...I'm feeling tired again. That's the only downfall of this song, which really isn't one at all. lol
yeah. i'm a nerd, like the other half of ng members...
anyways, I love your song. It's very good. 12 hours striaght? Wow. It's some pretty good stuff.
would you care to listen to my newest song, TranceStorm? I'm trying to get some good input on it, so...yeah.
a'ight, here are the scores:
5/5
10/10
downloaded! yay!
haha bless you, knocked you back to beddy bo's have i XD Studying is the right way to go my friend, knowledge is power and all that. I'm glad you liked the song. No not 12 hours straight more like 2 hours. Anyways thanks very much for the review. I'll listen to your song.
pitters
I like it...
I like the bassline, the beginning could move a little faster though. I was actually wanting a good collab partner. You could possibly fill that spot.
check out my song, TranceStorm. It's my latest submission.
My AIM is Yodamanjaro.
If you want to communicate through that, that's ok. Email is fine as well, but not as fast as AIM.
Nice chord choices, btw.
5/5
10/10
It's pretty good, but...
like above, but...
1. Your kicks have a slight distortion coming from them. I would use the compressor. If need some help (if you are newer to it) then I could do it for you...
my AIM is Yodamanjaro. email works just as well to me, but AIM is quicker. I like the melody, but can be brought out earlier in the song instead of the beats. You did good, since it appears to me that you are newer to this, so i was nice with a
5/5
10/10
if you could give a review of my latest song, TraceStorm, that would be great.
<<MC BigBoy
Wow.
I agree with all of the men below me.
Electronica is generally at tempos 135 to 145. (beats per minute)
Dance is sometimes pushed up to 150, while hardcore goes 160-180.
(how I know this, don't ask. I know my tempos)
If you don't understand this, give me an PM, I'll explain it to you more in depth.
If you've got FL Studio, put it down to about 145 if you want to go a little fast.
Question: If you want to be a raver (song title), how in the ******* are you supposed to dance this fast? Is this a rave on E? I wouldn't know, but I'm sure someone on NG knows...just curious...just joking with you. :)
It has it's perks, but still needs a lot of work. Yeah. My first song, Frantic, is literally a piece of crap. If you don't believe me, listen to it yourself.
After a few months, I became more used to making songs and my music skill has increased and my latest submission called TranceStorm is really complex compared with my first batch of songs.
I can see you being really good with making some good ol' techno/industrial, but I guess you have to start somewhere...
thanks for the response, really didn't expect 4 reviews in less than 24 hours ^.^
Very nice
Yes. I like. This is very beautiful. I wish I had someone else to fill that gap with my songs...oh well. There is always a tomorrow. I'm hoping to start incorporating lyrics with my song now. Yes. A big step. It sounds good to me.
5/5
10/10
thx for the review & the vote! goodluck with ur songs!
...What should I say?
I think this needs a lot of work. Honestly, I thought my stuff wasn't very "complete sounding." This might be something good in an original NES game, but with technology these days...it sounds kinda simple.
The first thing that would need work is the bassline. I really don't hear one at all.
I think that the claps are a little too loud. Maybe that some other sounds going on during the melody would help this song greatly. Don't worry; I used to not be as good with FL Studio as I am now. If you want to check out a recent song of mine, take a look at Underseas or The Adventure. Those have several things going on at once and the listener likes to hear more than one thing going on. At least I do. You have the foundation of the song: the melody. Now you should build around it. I've given you a
10/10
5/5
just for effort and just because I honestly think that you are newer at this. I've only been making songs for a few months. With help from people on NG, my music has come a long way. I hope yours does the same.
NIce title, by the way.
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What is with this? Three songs up...I've had none. they do sound amazing. I've got the full of version of Underseas. It sounds pretty amazing. Probably the best song I've made so far...maybe. I'll find out in a little bit. Good job.
10/10
5/5
??? Christmas is like a month away.
I like this...you used FL Studio, right? I could tell, but I'm pretty sure you did. Good job though. I like it with it's delay and all. Yeah. Put some mean beats behind it and you've got some techno. How is it techno without the beats? Oh well. It's only a Christmas song...
good song
DJ nighmare is right. I had a no. 17 song in Techno earlier today and now it is off the first 6 pages...it didn't have a whole lot of votes, but a 0 vote had to be the case. People have no heart. This loop is good. I wish I could do my melody for my song, but I'm too stuck. I've been trying to find someone else to do it for me. If anyone wants to do it, tell me and I'll send the FL Studio file. Just give me an pm. btw, good loop. yeah. Enjoy your day. This loop makes me do so.
What's with the name...
I know I asked it...it's kinda odd.
Nice song though.
I thought the kick was kinda the wrong sound to use for this song...a little less gritty, I guess. Even for trance. I like the melody as well.
Would you listen to some of my stuff? Dance party and The Adventure are popular ones. I also have a new ambient song called Flying on a Star. It's a little different, but yeah. Keep up the good stuff man.
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