Yodamanjaro's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Inspiration~ -hania]

well...

Not a 10, just becuase of this:

Your voice was too soft the begining. It was kind of a little too soft to make the effect of you fading. Maybe you could repeat something in the beginning before starting with the first verse. Nice Song otherwise. As the #1 song, I guess I should pick everything out.

Keep up the good work. I've listened to your other stuff as well.
MC BigBoy

5/5
9/10

[Kriz: Fluctuations 2]

i love you

This song is very happy. I feel like going on an ice cream run now. lol
Then again, a root beer float does sound good right now...
My summary title is in a heterosexual way, btw...it's in a brotherly kinda love, if you know what I mean. I'm glad you pm'ed me about it :)

Have you checked out my latest submission, Walking in Silence? It's kinda different than what I usually do. A review would be great if you have the time...

As always,
MC BigBoy

[Necro (explicit language)]

hmm...

Ok everyone.

Listen to the song Necrophilia by Suicide Commando.

Now listen to this. Both are wrong, but at least this song puts it in a comedic fashion. The other one is really disturbing. AIM me if you want to hear it.

I like the song. It's different, but like I said, it puts a funny side to screwing dead people. Kinda reminds me of playing Halo. he he he. Corpse raping...

9/10
5/5

MC BiGBoy

[.X. Passing Airwaves]

FINISH HIM!

FINISH HIM! AAAARRRRGG!

this is a good foundation. I'm looking forward to the finished product. Good job!

MC BiGBoy

5/5
10/10

[[K]- Last Goodbyes]

pretty good, but...

What really didn't complete the package for this song was in the beginning actually. The sound that you use for the chords, the pad or whatever, was too stiny with the other sounds. Now, if you change everything else to make it harder-sounding, but I think you were going for a soft look. So, just change that, lower the volume of it a little, and you are good to go :)

5/5
8/10

MC BiGBoy

Korpze responds:

lol eh whatever, first ever non-remixed classical made ive made my life (on fl)
thanx tho

[´Kriz: Forever]

very good.

I really do think this is one of your best. I don't know if it is the "Best," but I definitely think it's worth downloading.

I better go to class now...eh.

5/5
10/10
dl

Kr1z responds:

aasome ^^
thx for the review :D
bye!

["Drown" - F-777]

well...

Personally, I still think you should remix one of my songs. It would sound great, but there's no reply... :(

Maybe me telling you this in your review would get possibly get your attention. Then again, what's it worth? Eh.

btw this song isn't worth being lost in the void known as the Audio Portal. It should be one of your "elite" songs.

I gave it a 5,
I gave it a 10
and I will probably download it later. Probably. Like the other 5000 people that are going to hear this song...he he he

anways, it's been nice.
MC BiGBoy

F-777 responds:

Don't worry man im planning to remix one of your songs. I just got this huge list of things to do.

10 more songs for my CD.
6 Collabs
Etc.

So i WILL be getting to that remix =P.

Thanks for your review man! I appreciate it!

[{soulX} Trance me Mellow]

i'm stunned

Wow. The beginning was good. I looked at the scores and the other review, then I listened to the song thinking that they were just jerks. I was disheartened when I heard it. I guess I'm not into the whole "out of tune" kinda thing. If you change the pitch of all of those tones, I'll give it my 5 and 10, guaranteed. But, with it not being in tune or in the right key, it sounds pretty bad. I'm not going to say terrible, just becuase you can definitely help this song. I'll give it a 3 just so it doesn't go under 1. But, for the review, I have give you a 1. You have a chance here to make it better, and I hope you do.

thanks
MC BiGBoy

DragonsoulX responds:

Hmmm now that i listen to it, i see what you mean. hmm i guess i'll do some tweaking. hehe!! thanks for the review, i really enjoy see this stuff.

[Triumph of Destiny]

a lot better

This is sounding much better. What I noticed early on when I listened to it the first time was that the bass should have been a bit more moving throughout the piece, along with the sudden cut-offs with it. If you meant to do that, and you want it that way, a cymbal crash would be great when you do that.

Another thing-I've done this myself-make sure when you record it that you make sure that at the end of it isn't looping back the beginning of the song. Try to hit record just right, I guess.

Anyways, you are improving.
MC BiGBoy

irush responds:

Thanks for the review mate. The tip you gave me about using the line cell or none helped me a bunch.

[.X. Crushed Hearts]

really good

I like it. I really don't hear many soft-er kinda beats on NG anymore. For example, I listen to a rap group called Jedi Mind Tricks (you should check em out btw), but they have a few songs in every album that kinda sound like this. Calm, but with some beats in the background to make ya nod to it.

The only thing that I found that I would have personally changed, not necessarily bad, but I would have altered the beats a little later in the song. Also, a faster snare could be used in the last measure of the phrase (i.e. :54, 1:11, etc).
that's all I can think of.

5/5
10/10
downloaded. heck yeah!

if you have time could you listen to NeoMax(remix) or Love Bells. Both are good songs, but that's only if you have the time.

anyways, keep it in the freezer.
MC BiGBoy