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Just putting my 2 cents in...
1. Are you sure to put this in techno? It sounds like DnB to me...and I'm not a particular fan of DnB. It's gotta flavor of it I guess. Not the straight up beats though to make it techno...
2. Your ending got cut off.
3. It's not mastered. I don't blame ya. NG (aka free dl) isn't worth mastering for unless you are seeking top 5 or w/e.
4. Also, what's special about this song that distinguishes it from everything elese??? What does this song have that others don't? I"m not saying my stuff is better, but people say they put this on repeat. I had to stop and take brief breaks in this song so I wouldn't drive myself mad.
Maybe it just me, but this is my opinion. The faster moving lines are a little too crazy for my taste and since I've been taught in a classical sense, there's not really a big musical line that goes throughout the song. It just shifts from one thing to another (in my perspective).
I'm not saying this song sucks or anything like that. I'm just madly curious (no pun intended) to why this song rises above the rest. Is it that half of NG users are ADD and can't stand to listen to somehting that makes a musical progression?
Also, the distortion drives me mad. Not a happy mad, more of a cringe mad.
Again, I'm not saying my msuic is better blah blah blah, that's a matter of opinion to which my view would be biased on.
Therefore, I will rate this
7/10
4/5
What to improve? I don't know. I'm just saying what drives me nuts...lol.
p.s. this may seem a little harsh to some, but the day after i die is when i'll start liking and/or making DnB, and this song smells of it...lol like a music stench. If there is such a thing...( -Agent Smith, Teh Matricks)
DJ Derrick